Here are two of my essays that I have wrote this year. I wanted to show the progress that I accomplished. The private prisons essay was the first out of the two that I wrote. The private prisons essay was not a bad essay at all just if you compare it to my other one (The curious incident of the dog in the night time) it does not hold up. You may be saying that the night time essay was written at a higher level because I enjoyed writing it over the private prisons one, but honestly they were both boring to write. So it seems that after the song writing I have progressed as a writer.