I wanted to prove that song writing could help you become a better writer. So with every research question I had to find data and I didn't want to only take the research I found on the internet so I wanted to show the progress that we showed. I can't say for sure if they enjoyed writing the better essay more, but honestly who likes writing essays. Anyway comparing the two essays is a little more difficult than comparing my own, but by just reading the two I can tell that Kaleb's "Making Community College Free" is at a higher level than "Does race matter to law enforcement."